Wednesday, 17 November 2010

My first poem.

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Cold winter breeze
Longing for the sun
Have to manage my time
To get this work done
Work, study, eat
Taking a break in time to slumber
Later I shall wake, but for now I shall slumber
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2 comments:

  1. Adesola21 November 2010 at 07:10

    Great poem start. Have you got more??? What did you think of mine? I like the graphic on your blog too.
    Adesola

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  2. Nicholas Norman22 November 2010 at 15:30

    Thanks, yes I do have more. I thought your poems so far were very good, the choice of words you use are very descriptive.

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